I thought I was the only Mother fan.
But no, I was wrong. Fucking great to find another fan of a series that I love.
Anyways, this sounded like an 1:1 of the original song. I'm not sure what to say about that, if it's good or not, but ya. You did a good job arranging it on the piano.
A decent melody.
The melody was decent. Sounded a bit awkward here and there, but overall, I'd say it flowed on without any problems.
What I would suggest you is to add more instruments, effects to add up on the diversity. This song as it is in it's current state feels a bit too empty. Maybe make a transition from one instrument to another, and then add some more background pads. Some simple and clean percussions wouldn't hurt either. If possible, also try morphing all the instruments. I've noticed that makes a major difference.
There's always room for improvements. Keep on, my dear music producing fellow.
thanks a lot man.
this was a quick piece, I was definetly planning on adding some pads, strings, and experimenting more with FX. I have the demo version so I can't save any work...and I should be buying the full version..today. once again, thanks a lot for the review.
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